OK so i think i want to make the text a little more distressed on the front of the card. to match its look and the back i like that it is lighter because it looks more secondary... and for some reason its a little bit more muddy than what it really looks like.. imagine the top one.. just purple
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I like the direction you're heading in, however, the leopard print background and the striking neon purple type makes me think of a strip joint. It is quite a bit more exciting than the first draft of the designs you presented for the class on Thursday, but I think there might be a way of tweeking the design to give a more straight-forward, fashionable look. If you're going to use leopard-print, I would like to see something less extreme come out of the type. I may be wrong about the type of clients that come into Pin-up Girl Cosmetics, but I would imagine that they also cater to a somewhat conservative crowd who might be intimated by the look?? As you know, I am male....so I don't have experience indulging in such excitement, but when I see leopard print and neon purple, I must admit, I think of XTC or some other joint off of Piedmont... or maybe i'm drunk!
hah good point thanks.
Andrew's comment is so direct, haha and I was thinking something like that, it could be a little misleading to some of the clients, at least for guys. I will like to see more of the leopard-print, and Im not that exited about the purple outline it's kind of competing with the background. I still think that you should introduce some, item that distinguish the pinup girls in that era. Mad props though, you got out of that "corporate design".
love love love...this is where it needs to go it fits the place soo much more!!!
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